When I was an elementary school student, I was a shy boy. Interestingly, I still remember the first day in the classroom when I cried out loudly.
The first day was extremely terrible to me because I didn't know how to have a conversation with my unfamiliar classmates. I kept silent at least three day until the teacher came to encourage me to play together with others. Luckily, I met some good friend at the end if my elementary.
The first time I had contact with dancing was when i was in senior high. At that time, actually I didn't have and specific hobby and only know to play the computer game after school. However, one of my best friends told me that she hoped to learn street dancing and wished me to accompany her. Because of her I started my dancing life. I still remember the day when we went to the dancing studio I felt extremely excited and scared to enter the classroom. It's the world that I never knew before. Finally, we started to have our first street dance class. At beginning, teacher taught us some difficult dance moves I hardly could follow the steps. I practiced the moves again and again, unfortunately , I just could not do the moves well. I felt so frustrated at that movement and lost my confidence to learn the dance, nevertheless our teacher was so patient with us that she taught us slowly and friendly. After the class, she still taught us and encouraged us not to give up easily. At the same time, I didn't feel frustrated any more. On the other hand, I decided to keep learning the street dance.
Owing to my friend, I went to the dancing studio almost every day. At the first, I just learned only one dance style named Jazz dance. Lately, our teacher cheered us to try other style and mixed each other to create our own style. She always told us did not limit ourselves to certain kind of dancing style. She also emphasized that we weren't improve a lot if we didn't have passion on dancing. In fact, I feel very lucky to have met our teacher. Not only she taught us dancing skill but also taught us the positive attitude toward dancing and other thing. That's one of the reasons I keep dancing so far.
After entering the university, I joined the dancing club. I passed the audition and joined this big family. In the club, we had lots of performances and competitions. Every time I stand out on the stage that I grabbed the chance to practice my courage and also enjoy the music and the claps that the audiences gave us. Furthermore, I became the club leader at the second year of the university. However, due to some reasons, the school restricted us to hold our achievement performances in school's Auditorium where we dance. Being performers, this has stroke all of us a lot. Because of the restriction, we didn't stop looking for a suitable place. luckily, we applied a place in just right out side the campus. Finally, our performance had a perfect ending.
Dancing actually influences me a lot. It makes me feel more confident and also let me feel greatly enjoyment. Owning to the passion toward dancing. I became the club leader. Due to this, I learn how to hold the activities and keep a good relationship with my team mates and club members. However the most important thing is that I make lots of good friends by dancing together. Dancing is not merely an exercise for me, it brings me lots of sweet memories that I won't forget. Hopefully, I would be able to dance forever.
After entering the university, I joined the dancing club. I passed the audition and joined this big family. In the club, we had lots of performances and competitions. Every time I stand out on the stage that I grabbed the chance to practice my courage and also enjoy the music and the claps that the audiences gave us. Furthermore, I became the club leader at the second year of the university. However, due to some reasons, the school restricted us to hold our achievement performances in school's Auditorium where we dance. Being performers, this has stroke all of us a lot. Because of the restriction, we didn't stop looking for a suitable place. luckily, we applied a place in just right out side the campus. Finally, our performance had a perfect ending.
I think you were a nice leader to have this special experience.
回覆刪除It seems that you have learned a lot when you were a club leader.
回覆刪除Believe youself can go on your dream
回覆刪除WOW!You really type so much and I enjoy it a lot. I know you love dance so much
回覆刪除wow!! wish your dream come true
回覆刪除Peter:http://bigbyby1017.blogspot.tw/2013/09/dancing-life.html
回覆刪除Corrections in [ ] http://meetingwords.com/sT7c3JFR94
Quite a long piece!
-----------------------
At very beginning, I want to introduce myself briefly. When I was a[an] elementary school student, I was a shy boy at that period. Interestingly, I still remember the first day in the classroom that [when] I cried out loudly immediately.
The first day was extremely terrible to me because I didn't know how to have a conversation with my unfamiliar classmates. I kept silent at least three day until the teacher came to encourage me to play together with others. Luckily, I met some good friend at the end if my elementary.
--------THE FIRST TWO PARAGRAPHS ARE IRRELEVANT AND CAN BE DELETED-----
The first time I had contact to [WITH] dancing was when my [I WAS IN ] senior high. At that time, actually I didn't have and specific hobby and only know to play the computer game after school. However, one of my best friend[S] told me that she hoped to learn the street dance[DANCING] and wished me to accompany with her. Because of her that I started to my dancing life. I still remember the day when we went to the dancing studio that I felt extremely excited and scared to enter the classroom. It's the world that I never knew before. Finally, we started to have our first street dance class. At beginning, teacher taught us some difficult dance moves that I hardly [COULD FOLLOW THE STEPS] didn't know how to do it. I practiced the moves again and again, unfortunately , I just could not do the moves well. I felt so frustrated at that movement and lost my confidence to learn the dance, nevertheless our teacher was so patient with us that she taught us slowly and friendly [?]. After the class, she still taught us and encouraged us not to give up easily. At the same time, I didn't feel frustrated any more. On the other hand, I decided to keep learning the street dance at that movement.
回覆刪除Owing to my friend, I went to the dancing studio almost every day. At the first, I just learned only one dance style named Jazz dance. Lately, our teacher cheered us to try other style and mixed each other to create our own style. She always told us did not limit ourselves to certain kind of dancing style. She also emphasized that we weren't improve[ING] a lot if we didn't have passion on dancing. In fact, I feel very lucky to [HAVE MET] meet our teacher a lot. Not only she taught us the dancing skill but also taught us the passive attitude toward dancing and other thing [?]. That's one of the reason[S] I keep dancing so far.
After entering the university, I keep my mind to join[ED] the dancing club in school. I passed the audition and join[ED] this big family. In the club, we had lots of performances and competitions. Every time I stand out on the stage that I grabbed the chance to practice my courage and also enjoy the music and the claps that the audiences gave us. Furthermore, I became the club leader at the second year of the university. However, due to some reasons, the school restricted us to hold our achievement performances in school's Auditorium where we dance. Being performers, this has stroke [?] all of us a lot. Because of the restriction, we [DIDN'T STOP LOOKING FOR A SUITABLE PLACE] found the place non-stop. luckily, we applied the outside [A] places in[ JUST RIGHT OUTSIDE THE CAMPUS] school successfully. Finally, our performance [?] had had a perfect ending.
Dancing actually influences me a lot. It makes me feel more confident and also let me feel greatly enjoyable[ENJOYMENT]. Owning to the passion toward dancing. I became the club leader. Due to this, I learn how to hold the activities and keep a good relationship with my team mates and club members. However the most important thing is that I make lots of good friends by dancing together. Dancing [IS] not merely an exercise to [FOR] me, it brings me lots of sweet memory[IES] that I won't never forget. Hopefully, I want [WOULD BE ABLE] to dance forever.